Monday, April 13, 2009

Benjamin Philippe

My project is a Jim Croce Song that was fast pace. I loved the concept of a player piano and the lyrics on the roll rolling from up to down. I tried to accomplish that in my project.

13 comments:

  1. good sound
    good colors

    hard to follow the words on the paper at times, get blurry.

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  2. I love the way your camera seems to run over a piece of paper. I wanted to get that look myself but was unable to get it yet, nice job!

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  3. Nice use of movement for the text. Good background choice, it made the illusion of moving around come through even clearer.

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  4. fun song! loved the camera placement, you have a good eye. i think if you screened the font, it would have been better so that it'll look like its actually placed on the bkgd than just hovering on it.

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  5. positive:
    -The layout and design and texture was great, I liked the font was brown, aka leyroy brown.

    negative:
    -sometimes the song was off with the words

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  6. I liked the song. Good use of color. If I had to be nit picky I didn't like how Leroy's picture kept popping up for a split second then went away. I would have liked to see it as a background image too. Good job Ben!

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  7. nice work. the scrolling kind of made it the words jerky. but very nice concept Great Job!

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  8. originalish movements, nice take on the text movement. if you want a camera to move instead of words, try the to make a new layer/camera

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  9. I liked the background and the concept. Good timing as well, even if you didn't think so.

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  10. Good:
    1. Interesting background
    2. Nice use of images
    3. Good movement of the background

    Bad (Not Really):
    1.You could maybe animate individual words more
    2. You could add blending modes
    3. You could add effects

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  11. I thought the concept was good. and type was nice looking, like the walking feel.
    the timing was off
    i got lostand felt sick sometimes
    it was zoomed in a little too much

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