Monday, February 23, 2009

Benjamin Phillippe- Project2

After viewing the project, please comment three strengths and three weaknesses.

You can select five projects out of the class to critique.

9 comments:

  1. Loved the music!! Nice job on the side scrolling Effect and Nice job on the image on the TV.

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  2. very nice job on the image replacement. Nice job on the blocks and turtle and mushroom props.

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  3. I really like the way everything lined up so well, you did a great job!. I especially like when you kicked the turtle shell into the other guy, that was great...

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  4. 1.music was really jolly.
    2.the tracking was well done.
    3.titles and storyboarding were great, well done

    1.I don't know how i feel about the 1up
    2.the costume didn't look like mario but the color correction fx looked good (if you did use one)
    3.the ground could have used a little color correction

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  5. Great job on the image tracking and replacement! Great job on credits. Loved the concept!

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  6. Strengths
    1 Good tracking with the shell
    2 Great talent, good acting, good clothing
    3 Very good image replacement in beginning. I thought it was real

    Weaknesses

    1 I thought the turtle murdering scene started out too drawn out.
    2 I think the sound FX could have been a little better... I wanted to hear more from the actual game (1 up sound mainly)
    3 The second image replacement was a bit off

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  7. Good:
    1. Great music!
    2. Good use of text tracking.
    3. Good image replacement on the tv.

    Things that could be improved (Maybe. Probably not.):
    1. Uh...you can probably use the bezier warp some more on your image replacement.
    2. You could add more of a story to it.
    3. You could add more After Effects effects to it.

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  8. Good job on the image tracking. The tv looked awesome when it first turned on.

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  9. great image replacement. great concept, and well executed. the backgrounds could have been more game related.

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