Great job on intro! That was cool. One of the planets moved off screen at a very sharp angle and that was a little distracting. And the ending was very abrupt. Other than that I think it was great!
Strengths: 1) Very Smooth 2) Monkeys are cool 3) I really liked the part when the planet slowed down
Weakness: 1) The still images kinda threw the video off 2) The 3rd and 4th planets could have flown better 3)The stills seemed a little comic-booky... which would have been if you elaborated more on that.
1. Great after effects intro. 2. Nice fog. 3. Interesting artwork.
Weaknesses: 1. You could have tried to animate the monkeys more. 2. You could have used different planets in the space animations. 3. It was a little hard to hear the narration.
not really based on a tv show or movie. And why do the monkeys live on a green moon? Is it made of cheese? And if so, what kind of cheese? Please say Gouda. Smoked Gouda. Delicious smoked cheeses. An entire planet of them. Are you getting this, I am giving you GOLD here. Jesus, act a little appreciative. And maybe the bad guy can be the cracker commander. Yeah, he wants to rule the space monkeys world because of the delicious cheese mines. Except we need to make them something other than monkeys, monkeys hate cheese. Bears! Can you draw a bear? If not, learn. Excellent. That would make this soooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooo much better.
Comming Soon on Adult Swim!!!
ReplyDeletegreat illustrations
ReplyDeleteStrengths:
ReplyDeleteMonkeys, Space, Theme Music
Weakness:
Should have feathered the planets, used more after effects
I also feel that this will be on Adult Swim in the near future.
ReplyDeleteGreat job on intro! That was cool. One of the planets moved off screen at a very sharp angle and that was a little distracting. And the ending was very abrupt. Other than that I think it was great!
ReplyDeletegreat art work. good space fly through. could have use different planets instead of just changing color. Great Job!
ReplyDeleteStrengths:
ReplyDelete1) Very Smooth
2) Monkeys are cool
3) I really liked the part when the planet slowed down
Weakness:
1) The still images kinda threw the video off
2) The 3rd and 4th planets could have flown better
3)The stills seemed a little comic-booky... which would have been if you elaborated more on that.
It was funny and entertaining. I would watch it. I don't know what weaknesses I could add, maybe a maya planet animation but it was really good!
ReplyDeleteStrengths:
ReplyDelete1. Great after effects intro.
2. Nice fog.
3. Interesting artwork.
Weaknesses:
1. You could have tried to animate the monkeys more.
2. You could have used different planets in the space animations.
3. It was a little hard to hear the narration.
it looks really good, want to see it when it hits the big time. 3d planets would have made it more real mmmk.
ReplyDeletenot really based on a tv show or movie. And why do the monkeys live on a green moon? Is it made of cheese? And if so, what kind of cheese? Please say Gouda. Smoked Gouda. Delicious smoked cheeses. An entire planet of them. Are you getting this, I am giving you GOLD here. Jesus, act a little appreciative. And maybe the bad guy can be the cracker commander. Yeah, he wants to rule the space monkeys world because of the delicious cheese mines. Except we need to make them something other than monkeys, monkeys hate cheese. Bears! Can you draw a bear? If not, learn. Excellent. That would make this soooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooo much better.
ReplyDeletestrenghts: original, nice music, good animation
ReplyDeleteweaknesses: better camera movements, make planets 3d, make it cleaner
nice job, maybe make it alittle cleaner.
ReplyDeletestrength
ReplyDeleteanimations
space background
voice over
weakness
paning
colors were dark
not sure what else