strengths 1.nice location shots 2.good introduction of people 3.great presentation
weaknesses 1.the green screen could have been better 2.the motion tracking could have been better, you can see the finger 3.font could have looked tighter
Good job on the office spoof! Good job with the different shots! Only problem I saw was the halo around Zack during the green screen shots and Zack is behind the Spot logo for a brief second. Other than that good job!
Good job. It is very similar to the real intro of the show. I would say that fixing the sign sequence so that Zach doesn't go behind it would make it a little better, but that's not a big deal.
USE A LIGHT KIT NET TIME YOU DO SOMETHING INDOOR. POR FAVOR, BUT OTHER THAN THAT IT WAS PRETTY GOOD. DONT WATCH THE OFFICE AND NEVER WILL, BUT GOOD JOB ANYWAY.
Weaknesses: (or maybe things you might to work on) 1. You could work a little more on the image replacement. 2. Some of the video was out of focus. 3. You could have used more after effects.
Weaknesses 1)The audio in the powerpoint didn't work. That was a bummer. 2)You made Indianapolis look boring. 3)The motion tracking at the end could have been better.
As I sat, excited and slightly afraid of what the future may hold, I was still calm, because I felt as if I was prepared. However, when the video started I realized that I was woefully unprepared for the greatness that was bestowed upon me. It was like seeing Gods junk. I was amazed.
I really like the treatment, but the greenscreen could have been better. Great Job!
ReplyDeletestrengths
ReplyDelete1.nice location shots
2.good introduction of people
3.great presentation
weaknesses
1.the green screen could have been better
2.the motion tracking could have been better, you can see the finger
3.font could have looked tighter
Good job on the office spoof! Good job with the different shots! Only problem I saw was the halo around Zack during the green screen shots and Zack is behind the Spot logo for a brief second. Other than that good job!
ReplyDeleteGood job. It is very similar to the real intro of the show. I would say that fixing the sign sequence so that Zach doesn't go behind it would make it a little better, but that's not a big deal.
ReplyDeleteUSE A LIGHT KIT NET TIME YOU DO SOMETHING INDOOR. POR FAVOR, BUT OTHER THAN THAT IT WAS PRETTY GOOD. DONT WATCH THE OFFICE AND NEVER WILL, BUT GOOD JOB ANYWAY.
ReplyDeleteA+++
ReplyDeleteStrengths:
1. Very detailed work!
2. Nice establishing shots.
3. Smooth editing.
Weaknesses: (or maybe things you might to work on)
1. You could work a little more on the image replacement.
2. Some of the video was out of focus.
3. You could have used more after effects.
strength
ReplyDeletegood
good concept
nice creativity
weakness
green screen
green screen
green screen
It flowed good.
ReplyDeleteThe sound synced well.
The shots were similar to the original witch is great man.
The animation was ok.
The green screen could be better keyed.
You should have fired the actor with the pom-poms!
strength:
ReplyDeleteSimilar to office intro, cut well to the music, acting was believable
weakness:
bad font for title/names, shaky shots, green screen underneath the spot at the end...his hands should be on top.
Strengths
ReplyDelete1)Good treatment
2)Awesome
3)For reals
Weaknesses
1)The audio in the powerpoint didn't work. That was a bummer.
2)You made Indianapolis look boring.
3)The motion tracking at the end could have been better.
As I sat, excited and slightly afraid of what the future may hold, I was still calm, because I felt as if I was prepared. However, when the video started I realized that I was woefully unprepared for the greatness that was bestowed upon me. It was like seeing Gods junk. I was amazed.
ReplyDeletestrenghts: pretty similar to original office, nice flow, interesting
ReplyDeleteweakness: shaky shots, use better font, better overall shots.
I think you did a great job, there were many good things, but some video could have been more steady.
ReplyDelete